You now have two substantial documents in your portfolio: the personal statement from Strand 1.1, and the career progression plan draft you built in the last lessons. Today you are reflecting by holding them against each other and asking one hard question: does the person in that statement plausibly do this plan?
If the answer is no, something changes before you leave: the plan, the statement, or both. That change is the work of ALT 2 alignment, and it is the second scheduled revisit of your personal statement. If both documents already point the same way, your job is to prove that with quotes and say so in the alignment note; do not invent a rewrite.
Four findings and one process idea run through today's test. Read them once, then use them as labels when you annotate. Orphan evidence and unsupported plan claims point in opposite directions: do not treat them as the same label.
| Term | What it means for you | Real example |
|---|---|---|
| Alignment | A place where your statement and your plan point the same way. Mark every sentence the plan honestly supports. | A statement that names calm customer work beside a plan that starts with a hospitality traineeship |
| Contradiction | A place where the two documents pull against each other. Mark every sentence a reader would not believe beside this plan. | A healthcare-focused statement beside a plan that only names a software apprenticeship |
| Orphan evidence | Strong material in the statement that the plan never uses. Statement has it; plan ignores it. | Two years at a homework club that never appears on a software-route plan |
| Unsupported plan claim | A milestone on the plan that the statement gives no evidence for. Plan claims it; statement cannot back it. | A summer coding course on the plan while the statement never mentions computing |
| Statement revisit | Today you either edit the statement, edit the plan, or write a short evidence-backed defence of full alignment. The alignment note must show which path you took. This is the second scheduled revisit of ALT 1. | After spotting a software plan with no computing evidence in the statement, rewrite the subjects sentence to name a coding project, or drop the software milestone |
Keep the two directions separate when you label: orphan is unused statement evidence; unsupported plan claim is a plan milestone with no statement backing.
First you practise the labels on Jamie's personal statement, read against Jamie's plan. Jamie's plan draft aims at a software or ICT apprenticeship route (earn while you learn), a summer coding course, and a junior tech-support role within five years. Keep that plan in your head while you annotate the statement.
Jamie practice (about 10 minutes). Pick a label, then click the phrase it fits. Stop when the model is revealed and notice where you differed. The useful disagreements are usually on orphan claims: things the statement is proud of that the plan never uses. After the reveal, your teacher will name two or three unsupported plan claims on Jamie's route (the inverse direction) before you switch.
Hard switch: open your own files. Do the real test on your own two documents. Open your personal statement and your ALT 2 Career Progression Plan Draft. In a new portfolio document called PS to CPP Alignment (Strand 1.2 folder), work through four passes:
Before you write the eight-line note, answer:
Then make the change today. A valid change can be one rewritten sentence or one cut milestone; quality of the decision matters more than volume of rewrite. Revise the plan, revise the statement, or revise both. Update the actual files, not just the alignment note. If both documents already align, do not invent a rewrite: defend full alignment with quoted evidence in the note.
At the bottom of PS to CPP Alignment, write what you changed and why in no more than eight lines. Use this stem if it helps:
This feeds ALT 2 directly, and it is your second scheduled personal-statement revisit. The alignment note must show which path you took.
With the person beside you, share one quoted contradiction or one unsupported plan claim from your own lists (about three minutes). Keep it concrete: read the line, do not summarise the feeling.
Use any remaining time to finish the source-file edit and the eight-line note in PS to CPP Alignment before the summary. The decision checks already sit at the end of the annotation step; this block is for one spoken example and a clean save.
Today you reflected by testing whether the person in your personal statement plausibly does your career progression plan.
Optional stretch: rewrite one orphan strength from your statement as a single plan milestone on the education or workplace row, dated inside twelve months, so the evidence has somewhere to go.
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