Intermediate
60 mins
Teacher/Student led
+65 XP
Pupils work on their own device

Shape the Story

In this lesson, learn to structure talks using hooks to grab attention, signposts for main points and a clear ending message. Practice turning speaker notes into cue words and hiding slides rather than deleting them.

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    1 - Introduction ~5 mins

    Illustration for IntroductionToday you shape how a talk opens, runs through three points and ends on one clear message, and turn long notes into short cue words.

    By the end of this lesson you will:

    • Open with a hook that earns attention
    • Signpost three points and close on one message or ask
    • Use cue-word notes and hide a spare slide

    Warm-up

    What did a speaker do in the first seconds that grabbed you?

    2 - Key Concepts ~5 mins

    ConceptWhy it mattersExample
    Hook: opening question, fact or tiny storyGrabs the room in seconds"Why do most visitors miss the best Wild Atlantic Way stretch?"
    Signposts: first, second, finallyKeeps listeners with you"Second: free stops beat paid ones"
    Cue-word notes: short prompts, not a scriptEyes up, natural talkWeather first, under 80 km, pack layers
    Hide, do not delete: skip a spare in the showDetail stays if someone asksHide "Ferry times for the islands" until needed

    3 - Step-by-step Task: Shape a Sample Talk ~15 mins

    Build a short Wild Atlantic Way sample in slides: hook, three signposts, ending, cue words and one hidden spare. Your own outline later uses this same shape on a one-page Word for the web or Google Docs text file.

    Slide titles to type

    • Slide 1 (hook): Why do most visitors miss the best kilometre of the Wild Atlantic Way?
    • Slide 2: First: the route is not one road
    • Slide 3: Second: the free stops beat the paid ones
    • Slide 4: Finally: you only need one good day
    • Slide 5 (ending): Choose one stretch near you and go this month.
    • Slide 6 (spare): Ferry times for the islands

    Notes work (Point 1 and Point 2)

    Script for Point 1 notes: When you plan a day on the way, start with the weather forecast for the coast, pick a stretch under eighty kilometres so you are not rushed, pack layers because the wind changes fast, and leave time to stop whenever a view opens up rather than racing the whole loop.

    Cue words for Point 1: Weather first, under 80 km, pack layers, stop for views, no racing

    Worked cue cut: "The free lookout points often beat the paid visitor centres on a tight budget." becomes Free lookouts, beat paid centres, tight budget.

    Your turn (Point 2 notes): Pack a flask and a windproof layer because coastal weather flips in minutes.

    4 - Common Issues ~3 mins

    Common Issues

    IssueSolution
    I cannot see the notes pane{{menu:View -> Notes}} in PowerPoint for the web, or {{menu:View -> Show speaker notes}} in Google Slides
    Hidden slide still shows while I editNormal: it only skips in the slide show
    Cue words are still full sentencesCut each line to three or four prompt words
    Wrong app for the outlineWord for the web or Google Docs in {{code:Digital_Presentations}}, not slides

    5 - Portfolio Build: Talk Outline ~15 mins

    Independent Practice

    Your goal: Lock your talk shape on one page so every later slide has a clear path.
    Time: ~15 minutes
    Task: In {{code:Digital_Presentations}}, create a one-page text file named {{code:05_talk_outline}} (not a slides file). On OneDrive click {{btn:New}} then {{btn:Word document}}; on Google Drive click {{btn:New}} then {{btn:Google Docs}}. Rename it {{code:05_talk_outline}}.

    Use the same topic as your {{code:02_talk_deck}} title slide. If you have no topic yet, pick a TY topic (a class trip fundraiser, your sports club, a subject project) and note it at the top.

    Type these labels and fill each line with a short phrase:
    Hook:
    First:
    Second:
    Finally:
    Ending or ask:

    This is five plain lines on a text page. Stuck on the hook? Start with a question, a surprising fact, or one tiny story.

    Quick example (different topic): Hook "What if one tray of brownies funded the class trip?"; First "Costs are lower than you think"; Ending "Sign up before Friday."
    Success criteria:
    • {{code:05_talk_outline}} has a hook, three signposts and an ending or ask on one page
    • The outline is your own talk, not the sample
    • The file is saved in {{code:Digital_Presentations}}
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